Adam: Is this... Love? (comments)

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Quasi-pseudo-incest is fine and dandy as a subplot. (Heck, the guys put their own incest-related DrPoss in the Souragne Gaz, and were a lot less coy about it than you've been.) Just try and keep the actual porn off-camera, okay? Blood-and-guts yes, boom-chicka-wow-wow no, just like in Gothic literature or American TV shows. :roll:

If you have to go kinkier than that, check with us first: we might say it's fine, so long as the content is labeled, or we might recommend that you post a link like MoE is doing.
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Hey, I tried to open an account on FanFiction.net.

That went fine.

But then I tried to upload something there from a Word document (.doc file). That did not work. The file was well under the 9MB limit, but it wouldn't upload. Each time I kept getting an error message.
Empty Documentdoc You have uploaded an empty document or there was an error in processing.
How do I get it to work? This is really irritating.
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Dunno. Never worked on that site. Have you asked the moderators of it?
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I'm not sure how. The entire site layout is not in the slightest bit intuitive, and it's not clear which of the numerous links I'm supposed to click to ask for help.
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Sometimes an off day will have you revisiting old ideas and adding to them. Here, finally, is Chapter 6:
http://books.adultfanfiction.net/story. ... &chapter=6
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We're doing this elsewhere so I decided to do this too. Inga:
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My take on Adam:
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Re: Adam: Is this... Love? (comments)

Post by Manofevil »

I'm revisiting this. I actually edited the last chapter because I discovered an inconsistancy. I may actually be adding a chapter soon.
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Post by LadySoth »

This is a really lovely story Manofevil! I loved Adam's innocence and his touching response to Inga's advances. I really hope you consider adding another chapter to this--I'm really curious now, can Inga and Adam learn to truely "love" one another, do they already, and what is next for them? Would Adam want to marry Inga?

This is such a unique and poignant take on the character of Adam. Thanks for this wonderful story, and hope to hear more about the happy couple soon! :D
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