I have been working on Kalidnay in Ravenloft for a few years now. Its been a slow slog and there is still much to improve. It is now at the stage where I can start getting some feedback. One thing that is required is more gothic horror elements. That is something that I plan to weave into the work.
Dread Domain of Kalidnay (PDF).
Kalidnay in Ravenloft (WIP)
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Re: Kalidnay in Ravenloft (WIP)
Idk if you're still looking for any commentary on this, tomokaicho, but I liked what I was able to see already! The decision to make Thakok-An a dude and focus on the stigma of homosexuality in Athas was a cool one, as it's nice to give that tragic angle to some Darklords and real life social ideas/stigmas can really help with that. The organization that's there to help arcane practitioners is also a good touch! I can say more on the stuff about the Faro Kings and how you fleshed out Artan-Ak and the gladiatorial combats, but I just wanted to say this for now and give this thread some renewed attention 
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