I’ve finished reading it again this morning. I think you had Anton depicted as a very credible, evil but refined being. You make him say two things that are very clever and absolutely in character:
- Everyone is trapped—in one way or another. Some have prettier cages, that's all.
- Deep down inside all of us, there's a monster- Some spend their lives trying to fight it. They fail. Some coexist unhappily with their beast. They are miserable." He dragged her to her feet and grabbed her shoulders. "Larissa," he purred, "you and I
celebrate it."
These descriptions of Anton (and others thing he say) are so cool

When I wrote the expanded background story of Anton for our Souragne project, it was modeled after the novel (And he looks human too, don't worry!). In fact, we used it a lot in this project for inspiration and world building details.
Another comment (I do not have questions anymore), I loved the end scene with Willen going on the raft. It is very poignant, and brought me watery eyes again, which is unusual for me. Bravo! I think you made us like your heroine very much, so we became very empathic at her emotions. It was cute and cool.
Willen’s character would normally annoy me, in his all smile, over the top disneyesque gentleness, but I liked him a lot. His real nature had to do with it, but the way you had him described surely made him more palatable and credible
Lond! How can you be more evil then him? Next thing you know, he ate your baby! Run!
Joël
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