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Sanguina: A Possible History

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The Guirgiu line had come to its end, the plague had ensured that with meticulous certainty. For the first time in seven hundred years, the people of Sanguia, The Blooded Land, were left without a leader. Ravaged by plague and starving in the coldest winter in memory, the people believed that the end was nigh. The Mountain was harsh, and there was no escape from its grip.

The few men who remained healthy met to decide what to do. Too many were sick to make the trek to the lowlands, and it was doubtful that they had enough food to survive the winter.

It was then that Radu the Great stepped forward. He was a warrior of unparalleled skill and a scholar of great intelligence. He knew the tales, of how the Guirgiu had conquered the people of the mountain and put them to the sword. He also knew the legends of the mountain, of the ancient spirits that hid amongst its heights.

Radu claimed that the plague was a judgement by the ancient spirits of the Mountain. He told the gathering that the Guirgiu had been found wanting and all suffered for their folly. For their softness, the ancient spirits had punished them, rotting them from the inside out and cursing them with a living death.

The people were frightened and begged Radu to save them.

His plan was simple. For such a great plague, they would have to climb to the top of the mountain. Once their, they would bargin with the most powerful of the Ancients, toppling her from her throne if need be. In this way, they would not only save themselves, but ensure prosperity for their children and their children's children.

The only person who would go with Radu was a young man named Mir whose beard was stil thin with youth. Bidding farewell to his wife and newborn son, he gathered his supplies and joined Radu in climbing the mountain.

The trek up the Mountain was harsh. The North Wind tried to bury them in snow, while mischevious fey sought to lure them to disaster. Still Radu The Great and his young friend Mir climbed. The trials they faced are remembered to this day, and the epic songs and stories are told around the fire when the North Wind blows its fiercest.

Finally, Radu and Mir reached the top of the Mountain. There, they found the palace of the Mountain Queen and entered into her icy domain. She greated them in all her terrible beauty and beckoned for Radu to speak and tell her of the suffering of his people.

Radu's words warmed the Mountain Queen's frozen heart and a tear dropped from her eye. She told Radu how the save his people from the ravaging of the plague.

"The hands of the king are the hands of a healer. By taking the burden of your people unto yourself will you save them from the Crimson Death."

At her words, Radu paled. He had intended to come back a hero, not offer himself as a sacrificial lamb. Seeing his hesitance, the Mountain Queen realized that he was not the noble man she thought him to be. She recognized that he had seeked to dominate the Mountain, to stand above it and all its power. For his arrogance, she cursed him, transforming him into stone and making him part of the mountain itself, sending him deep below into its depths.

As she finished, a voice sounded from behind her. Mir, the young companion of Radu stepped forward and offered himself as the sacrifice. the Queen of the Mountain looked deep within his heart and saw his desire to save his wife and son.

Mir descended the mountain soon after. Gathering the people to him, he spoke of what had happened on the mountain, telling the tale as it is told to this day. He proclaimed that he would take the Crimson Death onto himself and swore that his bloodline would make the same sacrifice if ever the time came. The people swore that they would follow the children of Mircea, "The Merciful One", so long as the Mountain stood tall.

And so Mir did travel the land and take the Crimson Death upon his shoulders. He travelled back to the Mountain which he had dedicated to Radu, rolled a boulder in front of the cave so that none might find his diseased body, and let death overtake him.

But the story does not end there.

The Mircea line ruled with a light and fair hand for many generations. As time went on, a rot began to enter the bloodline. Few believed in the Sacrifice of Mir and the promise of their blood. They began to rule for their own gain and forgot their humble origins.

The worst of them came in the form of Ladislav Mircea. A greedy, hedonistic young man, he split his time between reveling in his wealth and dabbling in alchemy, trying to turn base metals into gold. Both pursuits were expensive ones, and quickly did he drain his lands coffers. In order to pay for his indulgences, he instead invoked a heavy tax upon his people, increasing their burdens to keep himself amused. He also ordered that Mount Radu be mined, so that its gold might swell his coffers further.

The mummified remains found within one of the caves scarred away many of the miners. Disgusted by their cowardice, Ladislav ordered his enforcers to throw the body into the river. Soon afterwards, the Crimson Death once again began to stalk the land. Ladislav discovered this fact while travelling through a village. He was taken with the beauty of a peasant girl he had seen from the window of his carriage. As his guards forced her into their wagon, a scream was heard. An old woman had entered into the final stages of the Crimson Death.

Ladislav knew at once what had to be done. He ordered the guards to burn down the village. Then he called his dearest friends to Castle Guirgiu, ordering to avoid the remains of the village. Finally, he locked the gate and decided to wait out the plague.

As the nobles kept themselves entertained, Ladislav kept a close watch on them. The instant any began to show signs of the slightest illness, they were promptly thrown over the walls. As he and his guests threw themselves into more and more debauched acts, the plague finally struck at Ladislav himself.

He quickly ordered for a round the clock masqueade, so that none would recognize that he was ill. Turning to his knowledge of alchemy, he tried to find a cure, having the guards steal partygoers to use as victims. Not only did the masqurade hide his sickness, but it also hid the disappearances.

But it was all for naught. As despair overtook him, Ladislav entered the ballroom. Dressed as a death in a long red robe, he called for a toast and waited for everyone to empty their cups. He then cursed the gathered nobles, claiming that they had betrayed him and brought the disease into his house. He claimed that they had killed him. Taking off his mask, he showed himself to be in the final dripping stages of the Crimson Death. As his guests screamed, he laughed and explained that he had poisoned the wine with drops of his own blood. If he was going to die, he was going to take them all with him, and the addition of his alchemy ensured that they would pass on before he did.

As the nobles at the masqurade began to die, the Mists rose up to embrace Sanguina.

Ladislav died and returned as a Vrykolaka that night, as did a number of his party guests. Unlike them, however, his mind is perfectly inact.

Hidesously deformed by undeath and disease, Ladislav requires that the masqurade continue. Any that enter his court are given costumes to wear, so that they might put his actions down to tradition and excentricity.

Like Strahd, Ladislav has faked his own "death" and replacement, though his people rarely take notice. The Crimson Death no longer ravages their land, so they assume that the original Ladislav finally fufilled his duty.

The heavy levy continues, though Ladislav is now completely engrossed in his study of alchemy to cure himself of his undeath. He has ordered that those that are unable to pay the taxes are to be brought to him to work off their debt. Most people who do find themselves cleaning and keeping Castle Guirgiu quickly become too weak and ill to continue. Some die while others are sent back home after having completed their service. These indentured servents becoming a source of food for Ladislav and his court, as well as providing a source of materials for his experiments.

Surprisingly, Ladislav has found several formula which restore his form to a more human appearance. Unfortunately, these formulas are expensive and are never permanent. In addition, Ladislav has discovered that he is building up an immunity to them, as it takes more and more for less results.

Ladislav avoids other people as much as possible, but keeps his enforcers well paid and gives them many freedoms. Otherwise, he deals very little with his subjects.

It should be noted that, on the night of the final masqurade, Ladislav's captured mistress escaped, completely untouched by the Crimson Death. The child that she carried, Ladislav's son, is the key to Ladislav's potions that temporarily return his humanity to him. His own bloodline is the key ingredient in these potions, though he does not yet understand why only certain people help him. The Mircea line does unknowingly continue and may still wipe the specter of disease from the land.

If their undead partiarch does not destroy them in his futile quest.

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I figure that its going to be at least three to four years before we see the Frozen Reaches in a Gazetteer. How is this for a history?

Please ignore the typos and rough patches. It is a first draft written just after waking up and I don't have time to go back and fix everything yet. I'll do that later over the course of a week. ;)
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That's pretty good. The part about Randu didn't seem necessary, though. Was there a specific reason for inserting it?
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ScS of the Fraternity wrote:That's pretty good. The part about Randu didn't seem necessary, though. Was there a specific reason for inserting it?
Mostly to show that the Mircea line truely was selfless and giving at one point. It shows that Ladislav not only betrayed his people and friends, but also his heritage. If I ever get time to really revise it, I'll play that part up. Make it more obvious that Radu was after something to make him ruler while Mir wanted to save his family, even at the cost of his own life.

Its only a first draft. Comments are, as always, appreciated.
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Nice take on Poe's MotRD. Well done, IMHO.

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Joël of the Fraternity wrote:Nice take on Poe's MotRD. Well done, IMHO.

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Well, the masque of the red death idea wasn't mine. The revalation at the ball and infecting everyone out of spite was, but not the basic ideas. those are from the RLDMG.

Edit: I've added a clause to Ladislav's attempts to look human.

Edit #2: To clarify, the Ravenloft DMG has Ladislav as a noble who locks up the gates when his land is ravaged by plague. Anyone who gets ill goes over the wall the hard way. Finally, he gets sick himself and begins to experiment on a cure using the blood of his guests. After that, he dies and enters Ravenloft. When the original Campagin setting came out, one of the Kargatane mentioned the domain was supposed to be Masque based, so I took that and the ideas in the DMG and ran with them.

I don't want to take the credit for making it Masque of the Red Death, that lies elsewhere.
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I really like the concept. And the take off on the short story of the Red Death was a nice touch.
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Check out the Vincent Price Masque of the Red Death and I think you'll see where I've gotten a fair number of the ideas. A little surreal, but it has Vincent Price as an evil Satan worshipping nobleman! How can you go wrong with Price as a villan?
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Overall, I think this is a nice piece of work. It certainly does ignite the imagination. However, I think more needs to be done when it comes to Prince Vladislav Mircea's evil, his curse if you will.

The underlying evil is there. Mircea is a man of greed (in the form of his alchemical experiments), of lust (needing to have the beautiful peasant girl), of gluttony (the parties of debauchery held in his name), and of pride (his need to find a cure for himself). Four of the seven deadly sins...not bad at all. A damn good start. And I would include wrath (his burning of the village), but as it is written it just doesn't seem to pop out at you. More needs to be done with this aspect I think.

Also, I think Mircea's curse should somehow involve the never-ending winter that is threatening to obliterate the Sanguinian culture. Maybe you could tie it in with wrath:

Vladislav had a daughter with that beautiful young peasant woman but was vehemently disappointed because he wanted a boy, after his own image. By the time this poor little girl was ten she has survived vicious beatings (along with her mother, who tried in vain to protect her), and sexual abuse (by those closest to the Prince).

Finally, one particularly cold and bitter winter night, the Prince decided he wanted to invite a particular landowner from Tirgo to attend his latest masquerade. But noting the raging blizzard outside he did not want to send any of his men to the village with the invitation. He needed them to keep the peasants just above broken, and collect the necessary taxes for his experiments. He couldn't risk losing them in such a manner, so instead he decides to send his daughter. After all, she was expendable.

Soon after the girl is let outside into the snowstorm, the mother begins looking for her. After a while she learns the terrible truth of what the Prince had done and rushes to retrieve her daughter. On her way outside, she turns and curses her smirking husband, "May an eternal winter haunt both the Prince and Sanguinia if the child cannot be found..."

Half-assed, I know. But something along those lines.

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Couldn't lurk any longer. My DM used Sanguina a while ago and his version was pretty close to this.

I don't think that you need to add the stuff about wrath. I get the impression that Ladislav burnt down the village to get rid of the infected material and people, not as some sort of revenge on the villagers for getting sick. And the stuff about the daughter seems tacked on.

My DM tied the eternal winter to Ladislav's current state. He was caught in a state of eternal death and the land reflects this. When he found a permanent cure spring came again. He also decided that the winter is at its coldest when the darklord is in his full undead form and not pretending to be alive.
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In retrospect, my sending of Mircea's daughter to the slaughter does seem a little over-the-top; try-hard. And the burning of the village, well, I still think that needs to be somehow a little more evil. As it was written, it appears to be the catalyst that delivers Mircea to Ravenloft, but in and by itself it seems more noble (if not twistedly logical) than evil. Aside from the fact that giving an order isn't necessarily evil in and of itself. It's a subtle evil, in that Manson sort of way (the old "Who's more evil, Jim Jones for telling parents to poison their children, or the parents who poisoned their children?" argument), yes, but in my opinion not "worthy of a domain evil". And the poisoning and experiments? Why would the Dark Powers take on that experiment again? They're already watching Markovia and Borca. The Red Death on the other hand...

Right now I'm sort of flopping on that one.

I do like the idea of tying Sanguinia's eternal winter to Vladislav's current state of mind and body. I detect a whiff of redemption there, but, what is the Prince trying to redeem himself of or from? His greed? Is this the whole story behind the Prince?

Deper, I for one would be interested if you provided us with more details of your DM's vision of Sanguinia. You certainly got my head going.

And if Tobias Blackburn is still around I'd love to hear from him/her as well. I really do like the basis of their work.
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One possible twist I can picture, if you think the story as-is doesn't make his evil "original" enough, would be if Mircea committed his crimes against the plague-sufferers, not to suppress the disease, but to suppress the ugly truth about his own health.

How about if Mircea assaulted not just the one girl, but a pair of sisters, one after the other? He has the first sister abducted, keeps her as his prisoner for a while, then unexpectedly casts her out on the village streets like trash (because she's failed a Madness check from his abuses and is near-catatonic, hence no longer fun). A week later, he orders that her sister, too, be brought to him; should she try to flee, the girls' parents and younger siblings will pay the price.

Having learned from her beaten, horror-numbed sibling's whimpers that Mircea was contemplating a similar fate for her, the second sister slips away to a nearby, plague-stricken village and deliberately exposes herself to the disease. She then allows herself to be taken captive, and endures the weeks of abuse to follow by clinging to the knowledge that she's infecting the man who destroyed her sister's mind.

Not long thereafter, Mircea discovers he's infected ... and realizes that, should his vassals find out, they'll desert him to save their own hides! Rather than admit his illness and live up to his selfless ancestor's legacy, instead he keeps it a secret, and starts experimenting to find a cure. He does invite noble guests to his castle and seal its gates, and he does order the burning of villages and the expulsion of anyone showing signs of being infected ... but as a cover to conceal the truth that he, himself, is diseased, not because he could care less about the plague's effects on anyone but himself. Indeed, he's the one who'd been infecting his guests all along (!), albeit unintentionally at first: the reason he'd gathered them there to begin with was so he'd have a ready supply of still-healthy subjects for his experiments; until his own illness became too terrible to conceal, he'd avoided physical contact with the guests as much as his pretense of "good health" allowed, just in case healthy people's blood proved essential to his own recovery.

This makes the villages' burning more the act of a coward and a hypocrite than an act of wrath, which is fine (not every DP-attracting motive has to be one of the 7 deadly sins). It accounts for why Mircea wound up with a particularly skuzzy, lowbrow form of vampirism -- there's nothing glamorous about being a coward -- and could play rather nicely off the whole "masques = false pretenses" concept, given the hypocrisy involved in killing others to "fight" a plague that he's already spreading himself.

The infected sister could curse Mircea before he strangles her in revenge for giving him the plague, while the near-catatonic one survives to bear his child (founder of the bloodline mentioned above). As the baby's mom is mad and unable to care for it, it's quietly fostered off, leaving no record of where Mircea's descendents might be found.


Just an alternate idea. If you use it, perhaps Mircea's the only one (other than the DPs) who knows the real truth about his crimes; anyone else who thinks they know the entire, macabre story would really only know the "he locked himself away to avoid the plague" version.
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X wrote:Aside from the fact that giving an order isn't necessarily evil in and of itself. It's a subtle evil, in that Manson sort of way (the old "Who's more evil, Jim Jones for telling parents to poison their children, or the parents who poisoned their children?" argument), yes, but in my opinion not "worthy of a domain evil".
Not sure the DPs agree with you on that one, at least judging by known precedents. Nostalia Romaine isn't darklord of Borca, for instance, even though she's the one who actually killed Camille for Ivana Boritsi, and Vlad Drakov probably doesn't get his own hands dirty when his "party decorations" get staked. :?
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Rotipher, that's more along the lines of what I was trying to get at. I like it anyway.

As to your speculation of the Dark Powers, I can't really argue with you there.
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Love the Radu and Mir part! And the 'undending masquerade' theme is just delightful.
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