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Sorry I'm late. A few tiems during the Gundarak portion (particularly P47-49) it refers to Zeindost instead of Zeidenburg. Makes sense to me since Mistmaster must have added Zeindost to his autocorrect library from his previous article, but I dont' see any other connections to the domains in the article, so I get the feeling it should be Zeidenburg.

Yes, I confirm, it should be Zeinderburg, instead.

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Mephisto, at the tail end of November I sent another pass at the Amber Wastes map, and just now I sent a run at improving the Markovia map. I don't know how often you check your FoS e-mail, so I thought I should comment here.

IanFordam wrote: Wed Dec 07, 2022 6:17 pm Mephisto, at the tail end of November I sent another pass at the Amber Wastes map, and just now I sent a run at improving the Markovia map. I don't know how often you check your FoS e-mail, so I thought I should comment here.

OK good that you did.

Mephisto of the FoS wrote: Wed Dec 07, 2022 7:27 pm

IanFordam wrote: Wed Dec 07, 2022 6:17 pm Mephisto, at the tail end of November I sent another pass at the Amber Wastes map, and just now I sent a run at improving the Markovia map. I don't know how often you check your FoS e-mail, so I thought I should comment here.

OK good that you did.

Occasionally I stumble across a good notion.

If I'm not too late, please change the heading "Naiter Man Nor Beast" on p.150 to "Neither Man Nor Beast".

Many thanks!

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Don't worry you have still time I was so busy for the past month and I hadn't had the chance to do anything, so the final version is going to be delayed (as was also the first version ). Sorry in advance, I have still 13 shields to go for my Richemuloise article and as I see it the pics for Markovia ae going to appear in the SoS gazetteer as I have no time at all to draw them.

So if you have more corrections don't hesitate "bring it on..."

Mephisto of the FoS wrote: Sat Dec 10, 2022 10:28 am So if you have more corrections don't hesitate "bring it on..."

I'll try not to abuse that too badly.

I spotted a couple of things in Secrets of Freedom as I was reading.

On page 189, about midway down the page on the left hand side, the word "woman" is missing a lowercase "o."

On page 190, and the very bottom of the left column, some of the verb tenses don't line up in "... recording voices and store the vibrations..." I think perhaps it should be "storing."

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I haven't finished Secrets of the Twisted Tower, but I spotted a few things.

First, there are at least two places where Erlin is spelled with the L and R switched (on page 235 in the second to last paragraph, and on page 237 in the requirements sidebar for the Zagazmonari prestige class).

Also on page 237, the gray lines of the table can be seen outside of the tan box. Something similar is going on in the table on page 222 for the Centurion of the Night.

The Dark Speech Feature mentions gaining the Dark Speech feat as a bonus feat, but it doesn't seem to reference where to find the feat. I assume you mean the version listed on page 48 of the Book of Vile Darkness (as opposed to the updated versions in Fiendish Codex I and Elder Evils), so a line referencing that would be useful.

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OK thanks!

I noticed in the Soul Kraken that 'Geldnahar' is misspelled as 'Geldnar' a few times.

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Rock of the Fraternity wrote: Wed Jan 04, 2023 6:18 am I noticed in the Soul Kraken that 'Geldnahar' is misspelled as 'Geldnar' a few times.

Ooops...

Rock of the Fraternity wrote: Wed Jan 04, 2023 6:18 am I noticed in the Soul Kraken that 'Geldnahar' is misspelled as 'Geldnar' a few times.

I would like to correct this correction.
It is spelled "Geldnehar" with a second E, so be careful not to correct it to "Geldnahar" with a second A.

Wolfglide of the Fraternity wrote: Wed Jan 04, 2023 7:25 pm

Rock of the Fraternity wrote: Wed Jan 04, 2023 6:18 am I noticed in the Soul Kraken that 'Geldnahar' is misspelled as 'Geldnar' a few times.

I would like to correct this correction.
It is spelled "Geldnehar" with a second E, so be careful not to correct it to "Geldnahar" with a second A.

>_< Whoops! Sorry...