Looking for a reviewer

[Ail]

Hi all,

I've written a short story for the Worlds of DnD contest last year. Since it has sort of got into a limbo due to lack of sufficient submissions, I still have no input on this story from anyone. So, I'm looking for people who are willing to read a 30-page fantasy story (with the main ideas taken from computer science, though) to give me some feedback on it. It is generic fantasy and has nothing to do with Ravenloft, although the basic premise could arguably be adapted.

If anyone's interested, please tell me.

Alex